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ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team.
What brilliant haikus! Well done!
My favourite is the one about ice cream. I like that it happens to rhyme. It's making me hungry!
You did a really great job at keeping the syllables the correct amount. This is really tricky!
Did you enjoy the activity?
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your posts!
Charlotte
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ReplyDeleteYes, I really enjoyed the activity. This was my first time writing haiku poems! I'd love some ice cream too!!
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