Daises blooming fast
Bees going from Dasie to Dasie
Buzzing all around
Wednesday 12 January 2022
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Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteDeja
It is me Quein again a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. This is an awesome Haiku poem that is strongly related to the summer time. I love that you made a great poem about daisies and bees. Your poem was lovely and summery, I could imagine and feel all of the words you have written- Ka Pai!!!
I love the creativity and emotions in poetry. Have you written poetry before these activities?
I hope you keep writing these fabulous poems, and don’t forget to submit them to the poetry slam!
Keep up the Super work I look forward to your next blog post!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein